tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9196718255906583920.post4007768031849682041..comments2023-11-21T02:17:40.432-08:00Comments on Melody Marshall: The Writers Voice: THE TREASURE HUNTAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06647785684647451430noreply@blogger.comBlogger23125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9196718255906583920.post-47377642011535982632015-06-06T08:29:30.305-07:002015-06-06T08:29:30.305-07:00Yay! I'm so happy to be chosen for Team Coffee...Yay! I'm so happy to be chosen for Team Coffeehouse! :DAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06647785684647451430noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9196718255906583920.post-7890847342821588912015-06-04T06:43:39.199-07:002015-06-04T06:43:39.199-07:00Hello, Melody. We're so happy to have you on T...Hello, Melody. We're so happy to have you on Team Coffeehouse! Could you please send your query, 1st three chapters, and a synopsis (if you have one) to brendadrakecontests(at)gmail(dot)com? When we receive your email, we'll send further instructions and add you to our Facebook group page. Thank you!Brenda Drakehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01263237745979525170noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9196718255906583920.post-7907437460323676632015-06-03T09:55:12.033-07:002015-06-03T09:55:12.033-07:00https://youtu.be/0nqn9IPLkSYhttps://youtu.be/0nqn9IPLkSYBrenda Drakehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01263237745979525170noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9196718255906583920.post-34237034037680157922015-06-03T09:53:25.762-07:002015-06-03T09:53:25.762-07:00Hello Melody, first I want to say WE WANT YOU ON T...Hello Melody, first I want to say WE WANT YOU ON TEAM COFFEEHOUSE! We love everything about this entry, the music, the crazy love triangle. You really hooked us with your query. The opening page is written well, but I paused, wondering if the story was starting in the correct place. So I'll want to review the first three chapters to see if there is a better place to start this. That is, if you're up for that. You can, obviously, reject my bid to have you on the team if you don't agree. I will add that I have a bi-sexual adoptive daughter and feel I can connect to this story and have some insight into your main character's world. Please, PLEASE, pick our team. (All other coaches need not apply - kidding - not really.) <br /><br />Also, I'll post Nikki's cute video in the next comment so you can see our excitement about your entry.Brenda Drakehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01263237745979525170noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9196718255906583920.post-70388381758591905792015-05-30T12:25:10.412-07:002015-05-30T12:25:10.412-07:00Thank you so much!Thank you so much!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06647785684647451430noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9196718255906583920.post-40798661131940852422015-05-30T11:43:22.403-07:002015-05-30T11:43:22.403-07:00I really like this, Melody! There is a good voice ...I really like this, Melody! There is a good voice here. Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01491975066831247597noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9196718255906583920.post-38190767868218633292015-05-30T08:28:44.453-07:002015-05-30T08:28:44.453-07:00Thanks, Connie!Thanks, Connie!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06647785684647451430noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9196718255906583920.post-34050251083303346022015-05-29T17:35:13.288-07:002015-05-29T17:35:13.288-07:00Nice job here. Just the right pacing and tone. And...Nice job here. Just the right pacing and tone. And it promises good taletelling.<br />ConnieAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15000931951877586748noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9196718255906583920.post-14359266883801059912015-05-28T16:10:20.345-07:002015-05-28T16:10:20.345-07:00Thank you, Kristin! Good luck to you, too!Thank you, Kristin! Good luck to you, too!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06647785684647451430noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9196718255906583920.post-11455576844232245442015-05-28T07:24:44.232-07:002015-05-28T07:24:44.232-07:00Ooh, a treasure hunt! This sounds like an interest...Ooh, a treasure hunt! This sounds like an interesting premise! I loved your query and first 250! Good luck in the competition!! :)Kristin Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15119967346326579747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9196718255906583920.post-35325722818400995502015-05-28T03:40:58.335-07:002015-05-28T03:40:58.335-07:00Thank you so much! There may be a few references t...Thank you so much! There may be a few references to OM&M! :) Good luck to you, too!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06647785684647451430noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9196718255906583920.post-76456995654234119712015-05-27T18:56:19.926-07:002015-05-27T18:56:19.926-07:00Melody!! This is def my type of book! I'm sure...Melody!! This is def my type of book! I'm sure your MC also listens to Blessthefall, Of Mice and Men, I See Stars, the Color Morale, etc. just to name a few (long live metalcore and hardcore)<br />Loved your query and 250! Good luck Melody!Marcellehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12696240493317556307noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9196718255906583920.post-90311370827498228862015-05-27T03:38:40.735-07:002015-05-27T03:38:40.735-07:00Wow, thanks so much!Wow, thanks so much!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06647785684647451430noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9196718255906583920.post-86276169285316399482015-05-26T20:11:30.131-07:002015-05-26T20:11:30.131-07:00I love everything about this. Title. Premise. Voic...I love everything about this. Title. Premise. Voice. This must find a publisher. Good luck, Melody!Ellen Mulhollandhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17978299715941154306noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9196718255906583920.post-48433198186505566612015-05-26T16:14:10.559-07:002015-05-26T16:14:10.559-07:00Thanks, Ellie! :)Thanks, Ellie! :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06647785684647451430noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9196718255906583920.post-89289390622266587782015-05-26T11:46:55.097-07:002015-05-26T11:46:55.097-07:00I love the humor and the plot line. Best of luck :...I love the humor and the plot line. Best of luck :)Sujahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16899054126546663789noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9196718255906583920.post-55257138010448614372015-05-25T18:28:43.412-07:002015-05-25T18:28:43.412-07:00This sounds like one of those perfect summer beach...This sounds like one of those perfect summer beach read books :) good luck!Elliehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17213406441675013527noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9196718255906583920.post-57196014309755520742015-05-24T09:04:21.344-07:002015-05-24T09:04:21.344-07:00Thanks, Laura! :DThanks, Laura! :DAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06647785684647451430noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9196718255906583920.post-35247666701715360112015-05-23T22:42:14.579-07:002015-05-23T22:42:14.579-07:00Wow, I love the sound of this! The treasure hunt, ...Wow, I love the sound of this! The treasure hunt, the secret admirer, mised messages and music - best of luck!Laura Rueckerthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12267281174937559086noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9196718255906583920.post-27217395955725667822015-05-23T13:13:01.982-07:002015-05-23T13:13:01.982-07:00Thanks! :)Thanks! :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06647785684647451430noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9196718255906583920.post-87319595897767568902015-05-23T13:12:49.217-07:002015-05-23T13:12:49.217-07:00Thank you!Thank you!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06647785684647451430noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9196718255906583920.post-60007560839452586782015-05-22T08:02:53.468-07:002015-05-22T08:02:53.468-07:00Good luck in the competition!Good luck in the competition!Annette T. Doddhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13153366966746537614noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9196718255906583920.post-74865378926577315072015-05-21T16:34:34.203-07:002015-05-21T16:34:34.203-07:00I very much like the story and would love to read ...I very much like the story and would love to read more! Good Luck!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com